Walk Away Broken Girl

Please hear
What I want to say, and fear
Please see
What I hide inside of me
Please touch
What hurts me so damn much
Please taste
What is running down my face
Please smell
What I do –
Fire, Brimstone, Hell.

I wish I could take you
Deep inside my mind
Point out all the cracks and flaws
The scars I cannot leave behind

I can’t say that I’m sorry
I’m sorry, but I can’t
I must think of myself now
My own freedom I grant

I wish you could have known me
I so wanted to know you
But I know I’m too broken
You can’t bear that too.

So I’ll pack the pieces I’ve let break
It’s a lonely road I must take
For love right now just can’t be.
I’m too much for you, you’re too much for me.

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2 responses to “Walk Away Broken Girl

  • SteveV

    Nice!
    I like it!

  • teamowg

    So sad…I especially like the first stanza: “Please hear…Please see…Please touch…” brings the poem to life, so to speak, by using all 5 senses. The repetition also emphasizes the protagonist’s suffering.

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